This is a quality track. the lead melody/arp should change though.
Good overall production. I like the strings part.
The melody/arp is an uncertain thing I'm still working with - and then leads aren't my strong point anyway. :P It's something subject to change as the song progresses.
Thanks for the comment. :)
good song bad quality
If you can get a more realistic guitar simulation vsti or use a real guitar, that would help. The piano sounds a bit flat. The melody and the music is good just work on quality.
Keep your head up
The song had a nice theme but not all the instruments fit well together. A few of the notes between the different melodies being played simultaneously clashed especially the baseline. Ur probably new to the whole makin music thing, this is good for someone just starting to make music. keep your head up and continue doing what you enjoy... makin muzic :D
Honestly I get 4's 5's and 3's voted on all my submissions and this one isn't the BEST one I subbmitted but I made the instruments clash together at some points in order to show some symbolism in the whole "Across the Planet" Thing. he REAL song is like 45 minutes with all kinds of stuff in it but I did not sub it to newgrounds. =D
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